During the 'safai abhiyan' carried out at home recently, i stumbled upon the poems i wrote a long time back.
The following holds special significance since this is my first poem written in class6. The poem goes like this:
"mera ek saathi hai,
woh lagta jaise haathi hai,
uski ek aasha hai,
woh hero banana chahta hai,
woh shadi karna chahta hai,
par kar nahi woh pata hai,
kyunki woh mota hai,
aur thoda sa chota hai"
i know its bekar even by standard of a class 6 child but then it was my first attempt...i worte many afterwards in a span of 6-7months...with a larger perspective of life...amongst them the best one,according to me, was titled 'sikka' which talks about money and its importance in todays world.
Just wondering if i was wiser then or now?
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your poem sounds much like mine of those days..:D.. when i used to gather some rhyming words n then wonder how to put them together to make sense(that was rare though)
hahaha....yea exactly this is what i used to do, initially at least:)
Happen to come across your blog..and read your poem...Too KEWL...
thanks for the comment...would have been wonderful if you would have left ur name or sumthing:)
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